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Where the ocean runs aground..

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Where the ocean runs aground...

Thee watch towards the infinite with a mesmerized stare
that ignores where to alight.
Thy eyes are tired, weary of that research,
as a giant albatross that for more than a year  
looks for his dark island;
where the ocean runs aground,
where the waves are broken down,
where the dazzling dawn bursts through the tide of light.
For those who deserve hope. :huggle:

French version : Où la mer s'échoue



Feedback question :
To what extent the chiaroscuro imagery fits to the discrepancy between despair and hope, longing and achievement ?
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Mirving's avatar
Je le préfères presque en anglais. Ca ajoute quelque choses, la déclinaison du "You". :D

Tu ajoutes même une question pour fair eun commentaire composé? :noes: